First off, I like your intro sentence. It is engaging and unique and really manages to get readers involved. It also manages to effectively show exactly what you mean with examples from your novel, as opposed to many essays which simply tell what they mean with broad assertions. This makes your essay particularly strong as it helps it break away from the mold and allows readers to follow your thinking a lot easier.
Also I want to mention that I find your argument for Johns desertions as a way to create freedom strange. I don't mean to say your wrong, you are not wrong. I just mean that I find it kind of ironic how in Catch-22 desertion, which is usually considered a bad thing, is treated as an almost noble goal. However, I see what you're saying here it makes sense, since it does reinforce a lot of the authors purpose.
First off, I like your intro sentence. It is engaging and unique and really manages to get readers involved. It also manages to effectively show exactly what you mean with examples from your novel, as opposed to many essays which simply tell what they mean with broad assertions. This makes your essay particularly strong as it helps it break away from the mold and allows readers to follow your thinking a lot easier.
ReplyDeleteAlso I want to mention that I find your argument for Johns desertions as a way to create freedom strange. I don't mean to say your wrong, you are not wrong. I just mean that I find it kind of ironic how in Catch-22 desertion, which is usually considered a bad thing, is treated as an almost noble goal. However, I see what you're saying here it makes sense, since it does reinforce a lot of the authors purpose.